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Safor's Spritesheet updated and with Story

April 1st, 2011, 12:47 am

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Reply Cronos Vanreicht, April 1st, 2011, 12:50 am

Just a bit closer now... Alright, though I technically didn't add much, I did sort it out a little bit so if anyone used it, it'd be easier to get around on. I've also added traits, weaknesses, and background story. Originally Safor was going to be the last of his kind, but it wouldn't be very fun if no one else could make their own Sravlevanian.... I mean Servian

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Reply Dregan, April 1st, 2011, 4:54 am

Whilst what you write is interesting, I do fear that you may have a slight balancing issue in terms of strengths and weaknesses. The character and his race appear largely resistant to a ton of different things, with advantages left right and centre in terms of what can be withstood. He has a quite obvious hugely defensive advantage, only countered by a small weakpoint which stands above the reach of the majority of characters which he is trained to specifically defend. On top of this, the species is skilled in BOTH strength AND dexterity depending on which pair of arms they choose to use.
Whilst yes, you do have your weaknesses, like the previously mentioned weakpoint, and the early-aged feralness, I do not feel that you have quite enough to accomodate the pure amount of areas of strengths and advantages you've given the species.
I'd suggest maybe looking into either toning down the strengths slightly, or AT LEAST finding one other disadvantage, just to improve the balance.
Despite this though, I do have to say, I quite enjoyed the read, and it's obvious you've certainly put a large amount of thought into this. It's just a matter of ironing it out slightly for a smoother, well-balanced character.

Reply Cronos Vanreicht, April 1st, 2011, 2:43 pm

It's good to know that you are interested in keeping track on how my character develops throughout all of this. originally, my character wasn't going to be magic resistant, but I kinda saw how most other authors show off their characters in comics with immense Dragonball Z attacks and stuff. so I thought that my character wouldn't die in a horrible heap of godmoding... there is one other attibrute that could be considered a weakness in a medieval world he came from, and that was their tribal prides. For each tribe, they're inscribed with body tattoos that cover the body, each one unique to the sravlevanian it's inscribed on. because of this, the tribes made it a traditional rule to never wear any sort of armor or heavy sets of clothing, only lightly draped cloaks for fending off the desert rays. The species finds it weak to rely on defensive equipment that they weren't born with, so armor's a no-go. the last thing i forgot is that they are plainly and simple physical combatants, using no magic until they're in their twilight years and rely on nature spells to improve the lives of the tribes. I'll make these changes when I post my next update so he might seem more balanced.... well less monstrous seeming to other humans and small bipedal animals hahah.

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